1 , Topic: side ... ... ... ...
children while writing : his clothes off one side , while pants.
Teacher comments : he in the end is to take off or wear ah
2, Topic: which
children to write: I am one of an injured left foot .
Teacher comments : You are centipede you
3, topic : children write
after another : from work , my father 's home after another .
Teacher comments : You have several fathers in the end ah
4, Topic: sad
children write : ditch section in front of my home very sad .
Teacher comments : the teacher is more sad.
5, topic : also has
children to write: my mother short and tall and fat and thin.
teacher comments ; your mother is a deformation of magic it?
6, topic : Do you see
children to write: What you looking at ! Ah
never seen the teacher comments: not seen
7, Title: thriving
children write : thriving Wing confession.
Teacher comments : Do not look too much drama !
8, Title: delicious
children write : delicious ass.
Teacher comments : Some things can not eat.
9, topic : naive
children wrote: really hot today.
Teacher comments : You're naive.
10, topic : really
children wrote: Yesterday I ate fruit, and turbid water .
Teacher comments : a phrase , can not be separated .
11, topic : first ... ... further ... ..., example : eat first, then ablution .
children write : Sir , good-bye !
Teacher comments : Imagination is more than the wisdom of the earth .
12, Topic: What is
children to write: a train passing Furthermore Moreover What is the status of
Moreover Moreover, the teacher comments: I have to die
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